It's NOT a romance. It's not very funny, there just wasn't much comedy to be mined for me in Andersonville Prison.
It's not even a real story
Part #2 of 13 episodes of how my heroes from Trouble in Texas met and how they became so loyal to each other.
Book #3 Stuck Together --Vince's story--releases in June 3.
Closer Than Brothers
Chapter Two
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"They didn't even swing a fist, the cowards."
Luke sounded disappointed. "Twenty against five and they just turned tail
and ran."
"Save
your energy, Kid." Vince said. "You'll need it in this place."
"I've
been doing a man's work since I could sit a horse, which was about the same
time I could walk, so I ain't no kid."
"I
think of myself as a father figure to you," Vince smiled. Since it was
pitch dark he didn’t figure Luke would care overly. Vince was standing, keeping
watch. His father had taught him at a very young age not to let anyone sneak up
on him. There was an ugly price to pay.
"You're
five years older than me at best, that'd make the strangest father who ever
lived. You were probably still running around in diapers in Chicago when I was
roping and branding cattle. They grow up fast in Texas."
"I
grew up mighty young. Trust me." Vince didn't bother telling more, but he
didn't call Luke Kid again either. He'd save it for another time. "I'll
stand the first watch. You all get some sleep."
Big John
rolled to his side and was snoring within minutes. A man who knew how to rest
when he got a chance.
They'd gone as a group and gotten
their meager possessions. Most of them had little more than a ragged blanket.
They'd found a spot together and would team up to protect each other from now
until they got out of this place either by the war ending or death.
Vince
felt his empty belly growl and still didn't have much doubt that he'd be taken
out of this place feet first. But he was used to the idea.
Luke was
asleep next. Two Texans. They seemed to have a way of using exactly the amount
of energy they needed and saving up all the rest. Wise men. They'd probably
survive in here if one of the dozens of deadly diseases didn't get them.
Dare was
up, fidgeting, pacing. The man could not be still. Vince and Dare's eyes met.
Jonas was quieter about it, but he didn't look ready to settle down either.
They all stepped away from those snoring Texans so their wakefulness wouldn't
rob their friends of sleep.
"Why
don't you two sleep?" Vince could stand for them to leave him alone,
honestly. Having friends was a new experience. It took some getting used to.
Dare
shook his head. "I don't think I've ever slept much more than four hours
at a stretch in my life. You two go ahead. My ma said I was the worst sleeping
baby she'd ever heard tell of. I was a torment from the cradle."
Jonas
gave a dry laugh. "I'll rest in a minute. Trouble like tonight always
leaves me stirred up. I need to spend some time in prayer."
"Because
you feel guilty for being trapped into a fight?" Dare asked.
"Because
I love it.” Jonas’s eye flashed blue in the moonlight and Vince was surprised
by a sudden urge to step back. “I feel guilty for standing here hungry for the
missed chance to hurt somebody."
Vince
gave Dare a startled look then turned back to Jonas. "Seems kind of
bloodthirsty for a parson."
"Yep,
it sure enough is. And it's way too close to the surface. I am a man of peace.
A man of prayer and forgiveness. I preach love. And that doesn’t stop me from
wanting to grab a gun and fill every one of those worthless scum full of
lead."
Vince
flinched at the venom in Jonas's voice.
"I'm
more than sure the Lord is real disappointed in me right now."
Vince wasn't
real sure how to respond to such a statement. In fact he should probably just
shut up, but what he should do was often enough not what he did. "So is
that hard to preach around come Sunday morning?"
Shaking
his head, staring at the ground, Jonas said, "You have no idea how
hard." He looked up, rubbing the back of his neck, and said, "I rode
the outlaw trail for a few years, before I bought into this war."
Vince
felt his brow arch. "You? Parson Jonas an outlaw?"
"Yep,
and I liked it. I had a powerful need to hurt my stepfather when I was too
small to do it, so I found a way to hurt other people by teaming up with some
wanted men and holding their horses while they robbed banks and the like. I was
eager for trouble and I was good at finding it."
"Your
stepfather? Tina's father?" Dare asked.
"Who's
Tina?" Vince asked.
Jonas
looked up sharply. "She's my baby sister and she writes letters to me all
the time. Dare's listened to me read a few of them. Tina thinks we share the
same father, but my ma was married twice. Her pa—my stepfather—died before she
was old enough to know him, thank the Good Lord."
Looking
around, Jonas said, "I need to step away from the bunch of you. Do some
praying to settle myself down and remember why God's way is better than
mine."
"Don't
go far," Dare said quietly.
"Not
out of hollering distance," Vince added.
Jonas
smiled and walked a dozen steps away, between men, lying side by side on the
miserable ground. Not all of them slept, some moaned, too sick or hungry to
sleep or be quiet. Their moaning was a mournful song that hung like a dirge
over the entire camp.
The
night hours were getting on and, if Vince didn't get some sleep soon, he'd need
to get through the whole day tomorrow on precious little strength and with a
whole stack of new enemies. Four hours sleep wasn't enough, but for one day he
could get by. He'd learned he could live through most anything in this place if
he just survived one day at a time.
Vince
watched Jonas find a spot and crouch, then sit with his head bowed low.
Probably too tired and hungry for kneeling.
That
left Vince with the shaggy-haired, twitching man who'd bought in right after
the Kid. Vince found himself liking Dare Riker for no reason he could explain.
Vince liked to be still and watch. Dare never stopped moving. Vince considered
himself smooth and polished. In here that was laughable considering he wore
rags and hadn't bathed, shaved or had a haircut in six months. But he'd been
masquerading as a Southern gentleman when he'd been caught, so he had a decent
if battered suit of clothes on and Dare looked like he had on rags when he'd
been brought in the place.
"How
long have you been in here?" Vince asked.
"It
feels like it's since the first mosquito hatched. Probably two months now is
all. Finding out about your trouble tonight is the first thing that's been good
since I was caught."
"Tonight
was good?" Vince shook his head. "You made a lot of bad enemies
tonight. From now on you're going need to be on guard every minute or you're
going to find yourself with a knife shoved between your ribs."
Dare
waved off Vince's worries. "If trouble's gonna find me it'll find me. I
hate sitting around in here and watching those Raiders hurt good men. I've
never been at the right place at the right time to stop them, but I've never
tried to be at the right place either. I've called myself a coward for it
plenty of times. Tonight I got to stand up on my hind legs like a man for the
first time in a long time. It felt good and if it brings danger my way, so be
it. Get some sleep if you think you can trust me to stand guard. I don't blame
you if you don't. A man's gotta earn trust. And it isn't always easy for a man
as edgy as you to give it. I won't sleep for a while whether you're up or not,
but maybe you can. You look like you're tuckered."
"I
expect I could sleep. I'm about as tired as a starving man can be."
Silence
stretched between them. Two starving men. Strong beneath the strain of hunger
and filth or they'd have succumbed to the sickness that ran through the camp.
No
amount of strength could hold out forever in here. But so far, yes, they'd been
strong enough to endure it.
"I
think I'll try and sleep, Dare. Thanks. I suspect our trouble's just beginning."
Vince headed for his blanket.
Dare
said quietly, "Our trouble started when we got thrown in here. Tonight,
maybe we took the first step to fighting against some of it."
Vince
let the dirge of men’s suffering that hung over Andersonville sing him to
sleep. For six months he’d been sinking down, more certain everyday he was
going to die in this purgatory.
Tonight, for the first time in a
long time, he felt a spark of hope.
9 comments:
I'm truly enjoying this story! Thank you for sharing it. I would love to see this in book form, to buy it. :)
Joy I'm giving it away free here, who knows what I might do with it in the future.
Thank you for giving us the background story. I love seeing how these guys got to be friends. I have read the first two of these books and am looking forward to the third.
This is so good! Thank you!
Thanks so much for writing their story! I have enjoyed it so far. One request, write faster! Lol! It is going to be hard to wait, but I will have to say the story and writing and the writer makes it easier! Really a treat for us readers! And very kind of you to make it available for free. Now to wait for the next chapter. ...:-)
Another great installment! I'm loving this!
loving the installments on these characters and find out their stories. got a smile out of Dare's comment about being torment from the cradle.
looking forward to the next chapter already! thanks Mary.
Twice a week from now until Stuck Together releases.
Saturdays and Wednesdays.
It's all written and loaded. Yes, that's right, I could show you the whole thing RIGHT NOW.
I feel the need to apologize!
Like I said you are worth the wait. Gives us something to look forward to each week right? Loving it so far. Just working on patience, as usual. ;-)
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